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Samantha Lazar's avatar

Gorgeous!!!!!

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Thanks Samantha! Your writing was really inspiring…super fun to follow!

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Wow Sylvia your work is always a delight to read and your audio is so soothing. (Almost like meditation)

I loved this bit:

“returning into flesh dissolving into becoming. Primal merging.”

vibes that stood out to me: resonance, intimacy, awakening.

Overall a rich sensory experience.

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Thank you Tolu! I like that it feels soothing especially as I took this idea as a sort of meditation on the senses and how we connect with each other. I feel like we are all so overstimulated by media and life and I find myself relishing in the quiet lesser focused on elements of relationships that cause us pause to consider more than just physical bonds. Plus so many of my closest relationships are with those that are further away so to find that other ways of connecting are important to me. Anyway, I'm glad you found a beautiful message or a way to connect with what I wrote. I'm all about senses so even if the sound and soothing tone is what someone connects with then I feel it's a big win. Hugs to you my friend! Thank you for being here.

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

I can totally relate 💯 and thank you for sharing

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Samantha this was beautiful work.

I especially loved this part

“I’ve been certified

To ‘stop the bleed’

Even if I remain one of

The lost”

The vibes that stood out: Loss, connection, eternity.

Amazing audio too!

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Samantha Lazar's avatar

Thank you!! I took a training called ‘stop the bleed’ so I could stuff bullet wounds and tie tourniquets for school shooting first aid. Fucked up.

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

That's wild...and so sad. I always love to know the inspirations and backstories of poems. We all write using such varied inspirations and this is proof.

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The Forgotten Muse's avatar

Yep that’s messed up indeed. But thankful that you’re doing what you can with this harsh reality. Hopefully the tides turn and we get to a time where we no longer have to worry about such horror.

Thank you for the backstory.💜

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wildflower's avatar

🔥🔥🔥

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Thank you my dear friend! 💖🤗🌱

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wildflower's avatar

My pleasure!! It’s awesome! 🤍

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Jenny Blue's avatar

Wow 🖤

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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

Thank you so much Jenny! Would love to have you join us! Thank you for sitting with our writing. 🌞

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Jenny Blue's avatar

My pleasure and thank you, Sylvia 🖤

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