Ok that was a lot of -e words! 😅 But I loved the flow of it and the words are great compliments. Thank you, Jozef. I'm so glad you enjoy what we are creating. That feedback is so appreciated. xo
Egrets, storks the Everglades water of life, carrying alewives fish tales taller than one stilt leg up erector sets steel mills red dye rust running down steams to color scales green speared by bills bobbing down economic ways through the glades hour glass turned brown upside down drought strikes agin penniless fish fry to become archaic remains but rise the storks bills will bring bundles of joy. Try a smoke stack emitted damper —flu relief, a small pill away; but years more to pay for bundles believed to be new year’s old days left behind in by way s gone beyond Merrimack’s River stones gouge days .
Thank you Tolu! It's really nice to have you here with us and the feedback is really wonderful, the fact that you are able to connect somehow--priceless. 💖
Thank you Samantha!! I know this has been really a great experience for both Jeremy and me so it's great to get the feedback and have you here with us. 🌞💖
I love this journey you two are going on together. It is entertaining, educational, expressive, elegant, and eloquent. One Love.
Thank you, Jozef. I'm delighted you feel that way. I appreciate your support. 🙏
You are a fine poet. And your mind is clearly a treasure trove of Canadian history and natural science.
Thank you. That's such a kind thing to say. I honestly couldn't be more flattered. ☺️
Ok that was a lot of -e words! 😅 But I loved the flow of it and the words are great compliments. Thank you, Jozef. I'm so glad you enjoy what we are creating. That feedback is so appreciated. xo
Egrets, storks the Everglades water of life, carrying alewives fish tales taller than one stilt leg up erector sets steel mills red dye rust running down steams to color scales green speared by bills bobbing down economic ways through the glades hour glass turned brown upside down drought strikes agin penniless fish fry to become archaic remains but rise the storks bills will bring bundles of joy. Try a smoke stack emitted damper —flu relief, a small pill away; but years more to pay for bundles believed to be new year’s old days left behind in by way s gone beyond Merrimack’s River stones gouge days .
What a trip that was!! Love the rhythm of your words and internal rhymes on this one, Richard! Thank you, as always, for your poetry. xo
“The river tells the sky it can ignore (not that it should) this steel toy, built of a child who never knew the alewife….”
Beautiful poem. Contemplative. Nature, memory, and human transience.
“Your manufactured peace built on lies, a crumbling dam against the
Rising tide of your leavings.”
Beautiful. Vivid imagery, rich symbolism and expression.
Thank you Tolu! It's really nice to have you here with us and the feedback is really wonderful, the fact that you are able to connect somehow--priceless. 💖
Both breathtaking!
Thank you Samantha!! I know this has been really a great experience for both Jeremy and me so it's great to get the feedback and have you here with us. 🌞💖